Just for some crit

[caccipergolo]

Hello to all!!
this is the first work i post, its a wip and some crit would be nice
Base Mesh in Blender, details in z brush.
Sround 4h work
(sorry for poor english)

[Roja]

Interesting style, I like it, but I think the face is too hard to read, it's a bit too exaggerated. I'd make it less wide, and maybe put in some more space between the eyes/nose/mouth.

[caccipergolo]

thanks for the reply Roya.
Probably i make more evident the labial zone with the texturing process (deep purple against a nice pink).
can you tell me something about the topology?
for example how do you change it for a little animation? (wich is the final goal with this one)??
thanks again for your time

caccipergolo