View Full Version : First time posting art here. Please tell me what you guys think.(Work in progress)
TheShizz
08-25-06, 09:08 AM
CharacterFront.jpg ChracterBack.jpg
Welcome.
My first thoughts are that he looks a little rigid, like perhaps he has a board running the length of his spine!! :) I would try and losen him up a little. The hands remind me of a blown-up dish gloves right now, they need a more natural pose. There is something about the feet that seems odd, but I can't put my finger on it... perhaps they need to point out slightly. Right now they look too straight out. This could be a camera/perspective thing.
Anyway... it is a good start. You just need to give him some character... losen him up!
elarcano
08-25-06, 02:58 PM
Hey Shizz,
It a very very good start :tu:
Yes, he looks rigid but I wouldn't worry about that until you repose him in another app.
Just refine the winkles of the clothes and remember that under them there's a body that has it's own volume.
Keep on posting, this could turn out pretty cool ;)
Oh! And the gun seems a bit small
Take care
ukdesigner
11-05-06, 07:41 AM
If it were mine, personally I would put a tiny detail of nails on his hand, just so they break up the fingers, and id break up his chest by adding either a cloth material or muscle definition.
The head is Excellent though ! :D Well done!
And yea hes obviously posed like that for rigging purposes right?
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