WIP- Old man face

[maddam]

Hi,
back to some realistic human head
i haven't find a good way for the eye so far, i'm still on it :)
anyway, here the progress so far
same modo ZB modo combo ;)

any comments are wellcome

old2.jpg
old.jpg

[hellraider-tr]

it looks great!

[- FoOD -]

Its lookin f@$%ing A .....vry cool

[Tartan]

WEll done Maddam! :tu:

[DHARMAESTUDIO]

Hello Madam:
I would like to give you some suggestions.
It is not a critique it is only to try to improve you excellence work.
I have post more times on your work and use to be amazing but...
I think you could change few of the features of this old man.
I think that the flow of some of the lines over the eyebrow are a little bite confusing, maybe less(less is more) and in better flow would make a big diference.
It look that there is wrinkles to high in the eyebrow, that would have to be on the fllopy eyelid.
Other thing it is the fatty tissue at booth sides of the mouth and chin, It is good but look more like the old age of a woman. I´m sure that could be a man like that but that make the model more androginous(I have spell it right?).

I see it NOW!!!! I was looking againn the model, the question it is that it is as wide as the mandible, that make it look dfemale, I suggest you make wider the mandible(close to the ear) than the fatty chin. Ithnk would be better make thnnner chin, but I leave it inyour hands.
Anyway good work. And thanks for sharing.
Arturo

[lordbinah]

greate !! do u renderered in z brush ? love de shader !

[VeryGrimm]

You really have a personal style going. I immediately recognize your work. Your renders are really crisp, too. Does Modo offer anything special that Maya or XSI doesn't have?

[Dezz]

very nice head!
there is something wrong on the upper part that kills the realism you achieved in the lower area.
kinda hard to tell, I'd say the eyes are too wide and not correctly placed.