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Wordsmith
04-25-06, 06:28 AM
Hello everyone.....

I'm finishing this piece up and wanted to post.
As always, any comments are welcomed.
Thanks

Word.GirlintheWindow.jpg

lear
04-25-06, 07:53 AM
full of emotions, man. really good:tu: :tu: :tu:
remembers me of S. Dali

boozy floozie
04-25-06, 12:51 PM
Look forward to seeing the work develop.

Blue hues in the greys would vibrate nicely against the oranges of the leaves.

Have you a title in mind?

Wordsmith
04-25-06, 05:05 PM
Mark, thank you for the suggestion.



I see where the blue tones work with the orange. Nothing major, but a gentle color infusion. I’ll play more, this was a way to see if I was interpreting your idea correctly. I also made a subtle lighting change for a bit more depth.................no name ideas yet.



Lear…thank you the generous compliment.

GirlintheWindow2.jpg

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Bas Mazur
04-26-06, 12:47 AM
Nice image, I almost missed it. I like the idea, but the stone needs a bit more work. You used the same alpha for the cracks and also the texture seems to repeat. I think you can push that image to a better result giving it a more natural look, some dirt in the deepest parts of the stone and more colorvariation in the individual leaves. You will get a better harmony between the back -and foreground. :tu:

Wordsmith
04-26-06, 07:13 AM
Bas, you're 100% correct. I was too close to it and missed the Alpha repetition. I gotta get these glasses fixed.

I appreciate the comments, I'll work on it tonight.

Thanks

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