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Baryonix
12-03-05, 11:16 AM
Small exercise to perfect me in the creation of the human face details. Later I shall attack the whole body, what will ask more time.

Texture painted in the hand. I have not used Zapp with organic model for moment.

Your comments and critics are welcome.

PS: Scuze me a lot for my poor English. :o

http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/1146/rhamanplan02307ys.jpg


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Kircho
12-03-05, 12:56 PM
EXELLENT - EXELLENT - AND ACCURATE - forms. I'm very excited by this work, I'm aspacially impressed with the area proceeding from and including the orbitals to the mouth! Very realistic depiction!

Also, on comming back from an enjoyable stroll through your gallery, I think a congratulations is in due since it seems you have improved your skills greatly.

I have minor critiques at this point on the defenition of the mouth and nose aswell as the amount of fatty tissue you've placed around his mouth. I wil be more willing to eleborate on this if I knew if this character was referenced from a real-life person?

Thanks for posting, it was an enjoyable experince for me to see this superb work! Btw I could'nt open the second smaller image?

Kircho

Baryonix
12-03-05, 02:09 PM
Thank's for that comment. :)

I noted the defects that you quoted, and my wife a little quoted me the same. I am going to retouch it, and particularly for the skin around the mouth.
I am satisfied that my realization pleases you. I hope to continue to evolve still. ;)
I was inspired by a ancient working companion. I have only souvenirs of him, but his lines inspired to me. It's a pity that I do not have of photographs for the comparison. I am impressioned by such a comment, and I t'en still thank. On the other hand, the second picture does not open, it is its real size. It is for the small poster with the top of the forum. :)

PS: Impressing and amazing your last realization with the demon's head. It is superb! :tu: :tu: :eek:

Frenchy Pilou
12-03-05, 02:53 PM
:D
Pilou

Baryonix
12-03-05, 04:39 PM
Lol, Pilou. :lol:;)