Womens Head - In need of help and CC

[Samst0r]

womensheadcomposit copy.jpg

So this is my first womens head but the problem is it doens't look very feminin...
lol so thats quite a bad think. I was wondering if someone could CC and tell me how i could make her more of a women. 1 hour WIP

Sam :D

[mizzthangg]

GREAT start so far! i think my crit would be to bring in the tops of the ears a bit and make them a little smaller...also, increase the fullness of the upper lip...i think that might start giving her a more feminine look.

[Bas Mazur]

upperlip more full, nosebridge less broad, ears more small, blabla.... The ears seems to be too much infront of the skul.
Better you look for some reference.
http://www.3d.sk/index.php
Here you can find some. good luck, keep going!

[Pooop]

nice for a first women head :tu: ,but u should learn more about proportions.Bas Mazur is right 3D.sk is great but u should subscribe to get access ,it's not free:confused: .

[ludikastyle]

she definitely needs a thinner neck, smaller ears and a less pronounced brow. "La donna è mobile, qual piuma al vento..."
Keep on , you're on the way!!!
Federaik

[Samst0r]

Okey thanks for the reply's. Iv'e changed stuff abit and have changed it quite abit from your advice buttt i still looks more something that would make you smile like :mad: and not :D which is :confused: Hmm more CC would be helpful thankswomensheadcomposit2 copy.jpg

Sam
:D

[vlad74]

Getting better and better

[joostbouwer]

it looks like her eyes are upside-down.

[Samst0r]

rofl her eyes being upsidedown is not a good sign...ill do some editting aftter dinner i think.

Sam
:D

[rtwolfenstein@hotmail.com]

ok here is what i think it looks nice although the bottom of the eye could be smoothed a bit which would solve the "upside down feeliing" also,
the nose could be a bit wideralthough i know someone told you to thin it a bit i still think it would look better
she slightly like sigourney weaver maybe its because she has such a bold face...

[Bimm the Stone]

Keep at it, 2nd head is better, looks much more female.

[Samst0r]

okay ive messed somemore and added a quick bumpmap to it im not happy with the nose looks strange IMO. As usual CC would be nice :D
womensheadcomposit3.jpg

Sam :D

[vlad74]

Work on the eyes. They are too close. The distance between them should be approximately one eye. Otherwise it is getting nice.:tu:

[Bas Mazur]

some help

headwoman.jpg

[Samst0r]

lolz thanks :D...
New Version :D

womenshead4.jpg

Hmm w00t it looks more like a women than the first one yay :lol: lol

ermm the usual... CC pleeeeassee :P

Sam
:D

[vlad74]

Bas rocks doesn't he. :D

[Bas Mazur]

lolz
?? I can show you where are the mistakes in this model, but after this model there will be more. So you have to learn to observe. Every time you see something, try to see it like you see it for the first time. This way is the best to learn how to make a shape or to remember how to paint or sculpt things. If you look to your hands now that way, you will say: 'Wow, that's a great design!' This way of looking at the world around is the only way to learn, because your mind is thinking to know how a shape looks like. A bad memory makes the different between a good or a bad sculpture. This is the best lesson you can get.

[Samst0r]

Thanks Mister Bas...and d'oh i do have bad memory...ill blame that :lol:

Sam
:D

[Bas Mazur]

I like your fun :confused:

[Samst0r]

Okey Tommorrow, ill try texturing hopefully...all the other times ive textured haven't went to well so will be fun to how it turns out. Thanks for the CC's

Sam
:)

[Bas Mazur]

Okey Tommorrow, ill try texturing hopefully...all the other times ive textured haven't went to well so will be fun to how it turns out. Thanks for the CC's

Sam
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If you know something about jewels you never take the false one :D

[Pooop]

I think the ears are still too big! they should be at the end of the jaw! and they will finbish at the same level as the eyes!
i totally agree with bas mazur ! u should observe alot! even if u are in the bus or in the street u will discover loads of things! watching at people how they are how the colour is!

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[Eastman]

We usually associate baldness with masculinity, so often when we see an untextured bald head, we instinctively respond thereafter, even if the face's features indeed are female. Try a quick paintover in Photoshop or GIMP, just roughly blocking out a female haircut in 2D (or 3D of course) and see if that helps.