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Kina
06-21-05, 11:56 AM
I have created this image with Photoshop and ZBrushage, for my exam.

calici-con-riflesso-lente.jpg (http://javascript<b></b>:zb_insimg('13508','calici-con-riflesso-lente.jpg',1,0))

calici-senza-riflesso-lente.jpg


what do you think about it?

vivien
06-21-05, 12:43 PM
good kina! l'unica cosa che cambierei è la texture ,"marmo" del piano...distrae dalla composizione!

*translation* i would change the marble texture, it's distracting the composition.

Drummer
06-21-05, 01:27 PM
really nice img !

only a suggestion : take attention to put better the objects on the plane, and give to this plane a little bit of prospective

keep it up :cool: :tu:

Kina
06-21-05, 01:42 PM
Thanks for the advices;)

Kina
06-21-05, 01:54 PM
bottiglia.jpg (javascript:zb_insimg('13523','bottiglia.jpg',1,0) )

Bas Mazur
06-21-05, 02:46 PM
Looks good Kina, but I should use a better texture for the marble. The drop of wine does not look like fluid. On a surface fluid always 'wants' to be flat.
Marble is easy to find but I post some I have.

Deus ex Machina
06-22-05, 07:57 AM
Good work :tu: :tu: :tu: .

I like the materials - only the background is not so good.
Perhaps you could change the background and use shadows to give it some depth.