My first one - an old man

[derFeef]

Phew... worked some hours now.
this is my first head i ever made in a modeling programm.
and my first finished zbrush model... well, maybe i will work on it a bit, but i made some mistakes i think.
just tell me if i go into the right direction. and i know, there are some anatomical issues, im working on this :rolleyes:

i wanted a irregular nose, but i think i have gone too far ;)
i dont know what went wrong with the mouth... very difficult in my eyes...

oldman_front.jpg


no lips? hehe... like i sayd before, the mouth is tough!

oldman_left.jpg

and now go ahead and pick me to pieces.
but i have to say that i am very proud of this one, zbrush is a great tool and i have done something i have never done before!

[Tartan]

Grats derfeef.. thats always a great achievement and milestone. The nose is a lil too onesided, thats taste.. On the lips i dont have a clue because I have been having a hard time with them also lol

Tartan

[derFeef]

sorry for pics not visible, i fixed that.


Grats derfeef.. thats always a great achievement and milestone. The nose is a lil too onesided, thats taste.. On the lips i dont have a clue because I have been having a hard time with them also lol
Tartan
thank you.
but i have to learn so much more about the human anatomy and stuff

btw. is it better to make a clean controlmesh with correct edgeloops in another modeling tool and then working with that in ZBrush or is the method with zSpheres ok?

[derFeef]

tried a skin shader.
oldman_skin.jpg (http://javascript%3Cb%3E%3C/b%3E:zb_insimg%28%2710061%27,%27oldman_skin.jpg%27 ,1,0%29)
im waiting hopefully for any respones or crits :(

[Moochie]

Welcome! Nice model, especially for a first effort. No major flaws in this at all .. all the proportions and shapes look right to my (untrained) eye. And I like his mouth and lips .. gives him personality, I think. Good one! :tu:

[vivien]

he's cute and well...old !!!!! :tu: really good first try. keep at it.

[derFeef]

Thank you very much - i appreciate that.
your words made me brave and i´ll keep going :D