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manou
09-05-04, 08:52 AM
I hadnt post for a long time, here it is, hope u like it and thx for viewing as usual =)
ps : textures made with artrage

finale.jpg

Junk
09-05-04, 10:05 AM
anatomically , the left arm is strange in the area of the shoulder; lloks lke t's pushed inward

You should tense the right arm if you want to add weigth and tension in the body, with legs straigth or put against something that support the body, like a crucifed corpse.

The lightning is pale, no shadow either?

keep on

kobi1kobi
09-05-04, 10:38 AM
nice idea, but most of the detail is lost in the darkness.
if the model is crucified, there shuold be some blood in the scene.

manou
09-05-04, 11:44 AM
Thx both for advices =)
Junk, si jai bien compris je dois plus tendre le bras droit et laisser le gauche plié ? et mettre les jambes plus droites ou les clouer au pilone =) ok je note :p
pr lepaule gauche ca vient de leclairage...enfin de ttes facons fo vraiment ke jachete un bookin danatomie =) pr les ombres jai completement oublie de les mettre mdr :rolleyes: merci pr ta rmq constructive c avant tout ca que je recherche sur ce type de forum. a+